"a year later..." what would you change in this write?

Ah, for just a peek in there! ;-) This was excellent...rhythmic flair permeated the entire write...and the babbling was truly joyous...you could feel it! I'm with Elaine...when you post something it is obvious you've devoted some time and heart to, and when you sarcastically, playfully reply to others' posts, you are two entirely different people! And I love ya both!